I want to get some opinions on my novel before I publish the first few chapters. I'd be willing to exhange feedback for feed back. Right now I have everything on a google doc.
Children of Spouts
Logline: Handi wishes for everything to remain the same on her mystical island, but Vince, a new arrival, wishes more than anything to return to his life beyond the island.
Synopsis:
Vince has just washed up on the shore of a mysterious island, with islanders who are determined to never let him leave. Well… not washed up… not on shore either… And the islanders are more like children and he more of woke up in the middle of the forest with a toddler screaming at him.
He’s told by the island’s unofficial leader Handi that he arrived through a phenomenon they call the spouts and it’s impossible to leave the island because of them. Handi is firm in her beliefs that the spouts protect them from the dangers of the world, but Vince can only see them as a force trapping him there.
As he searches for a way to leave his new island paradise, Vince’s elder brother teams up with another sibling of an island resident to find Vince and the island that only exists in myth.
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