I really liked the prologue! I read both episodes since it's supposed to be one chapter.
You have a good sense of pacing and as an establishing chapter, there's a lot of great things going for it. Even just in that intimate scene with Cenric on his own, we get a good sense of his character. I can clearly see the vision you have for this story, and I think it's wonderful!
I think you can definitely draw out some of that pacing especially in the first half of the chapter. I think we just get a lot of information about the world/character TOLD to us rather than sort of naturally building it out as we walk alongside the protagonist.
For example, the paragraph explaining Cenric's precognition ability feels like you're showing his hand too fast and all at once. Even though you're narrating this story from an Omniscient 3rd perspective, you can still withhold saying blatant information while weaving details that can allude to those facts until it comes later on.
Also, by definition of Prologue and what I've seen defined as a prologue in different mediums, this chapter doesn't necessarily read as a prologue, but more as a first chapter? Just something I noticed is all haha, I suppose what I'm trying to say is that you can easily combine the two prologue episodes with the first chapter.
Overall, your story has a lot of good things! I think just utilizing the characters to drive how information is presented would help you in the long run since you have good interactions between characters and a good sense of creating an environment. Don't give everything away too quickly! Boil the frog!! (with the readers being the frog)
Ok um here's my webcomic? To be perfectly frank, my first chapter is more so of a cool action fight sequence a la RWBY style hook rather than a "plot is being sparked" kind of chapter, so if you're more in the mood to analyze actual plot and dialogue feel free to skip to the second episode lmao