I won't inherently reply to everyone, but if you'd like help with your story progression because you feel stuck with the plot, you can share your (specifically plot points, not reading links) here. I'm willing to give my best advice.
Here is my webcomic, the next episode is where the plot kicks in when the main 3 villains (Eneil, Thalia, and Ubel) fail at doing a heist and will introduce their boss and the main villain of the comic.
But yeah I would love some feedback on the current story and what I can do to improve it.
This webtoon is new and ongoing (Dec 2023) so suggestions on story progression would be appreciated
Hi, thank you for this opportunity! Do you accept comics? I only have 3 episodes so far, but I'd like to hear your feedback and hopefully improve my storytelling!
Here's the link to the prologue:
@kyupol@moefaym
I do accept novels and comics, but please note, what it says above, not reading chapters, but reviewing plot points: something like the synopsis Robyn wrote, but for as much of your story as you have plot-pointed:
https://forums.tapas.io/t/20-pages-100-writer-needed/80350
Hey, sorry to barge in like that, but you could change "this guy" it sounds really rude, you know? Just mention the name of the person, thank you!@Leyelle
I fear that my comic is going to fast