The action looks nice, at least in the way I imagine it. Not sure what happens here though, what's Red doing with the hands and staff?...also I am not sure about Red's gender, sometimes it's she, sometimes it's he and it seems like a continuous typo rather than them being gender fluid.
The scene with Nobody's appearing is not very appealing. He snatched a person from a crumbling building and suddenly the victim 's family member appears outta nowhere to smash his face?
The dialogue between him and Heiroe is not really clear, does Heiroe mean to ask if Nobody is okay? Because I don't know. They also behave like they are friends, but later we find out they don't even know each other, so that's something to think about.
Light king? Because we just found out they have a dark king, so. It can't be the same kingdom. Or they are not "kings".
I got completely lost at whatever Heiroe is punching, having a flashback outta nowhere and the light king apparently still there watching it. What's happening?
Red is dull. A cardboard of a character, she's just sad all the time. Apparently she can kick ass, but all the other time she's just sad and talking in single word sentences.
I don't get what happens here. He asked Red if she remembers the song, she started singing and then he shamed her for that?
Nobody's being kicked in the alley in front of Heiroe's apartment is very convenient, a bit too convenient.
And honestly I rarely say this now that I am not an RP admin, but I'd really suggest changing Heiroe's and Nobody's names. Nobody's name would be very confusing to read and Heiroe's is just...too on the nose. At least I would change Heiroe, because it's almost cringy and Nobody's name has at least some explanation (although too weak at this point, imho).
I was pretty confused with a radio broadcasting the deeds of the evil king, because that's not how you present a tyrant. But apparently they also have a king of light, so it's even more confusing.