The artwork isn’t too bad, it’s clean as well. I also like that you haven’t opened the narrative with the standard exposition dump that so many comics here these days tend to - I’ve always felt that one shouldn’t open a series with a big exposition dump, but that parts of a setting should be introduced via context. Let’s look at the typical fairy story opening: “Once upon a time there was such-and-such.” While it doesn’t tell us much about the setting, it still comes across as forced. It is an overdone opening line. Now, compare this with the openings of Northern Lights by Philip Pullman, J.K. Rowling’s Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s Stone, J.R.R. Tolkien’s The Hobbit, Kenneth Grahame’s The Wind in the Willows L. Frank Baum’s Wonderful Wizard of Oz, George R.R. Martin’s A Song of Ice and Fire, Homer’s Iliad and so on. We are told nothing about these settings in the first two pages but we learn more and more about them as the stories go on. You have done this well, the monologue concerning the god was really well done in setting up the worldbuilding without putting it at the very beginning.
However, the panel structure can be difficult to follow at points at first. The panels are also tightly packed together, not giving the story enough space to breathe. I also don’t think that the caption for “The next day” needs to be particularly large. I also think the caption could be worked into one of the panels.