hihi, Myl from Hacheeachkee here,
You don't seem to have much up on the comic Sae. I know everyone's telling you to clean up your lines, I suppose the markings you put on the face to track the placement of eyes can go, but in some cases the sketch style can work out, but it's more of a hit or miss kind of ordeal. This comic would definitley work for Tapastic's platform, perhaps not so much on other comic host site platforms though (since it's not a scroll through). Try adding a bit more background, if not, then practice perspective and dynamic angles so that simple character dialogue doesn't turn out dry.