I think your comic has a lot of cute humour in it! But it suffers from presentation problems which isn't doing it any favours in standing out. For one thing, the pages all look a little low-contrast, like they're directly coming from the scanner without editing. Messing with the levels in Photoshop or a similar image editing software will give them a more cleaned-up look. It will help hide any pencil marks under the lettering and random bits of dust and fuzzles which make the pages look sloppy.
Also, the episode sizes are all over the place. Some of them fit the page really well, like "That's Life Children" or "Xenith's Desires", but others like the bio pages are huge and difficult to read because they don't fit the page.
So basically, doing those bits of polish is an easy way to make your comic stand out and look more professional!