I`ve browsed through.
First impression
Interesting story. A bit odd (in good meaning of the word). Nice but a bit too sketchy art.
Second Impression
Not enough establishment! To blank BG and characters are there cuz why?! I understand that the big idea was "lost in nowhere what to do now?!" and I like it. But a bit empty. I want to worry about about a character. To spend some emotions on her. Make her cold and hungry. Make her feel something and show it to me.
Overall
More positive impressions than negative
A lot of work to do
Will sub for MOAR!
would be pleased if you review my episode 1
Well.. as the question says I wanna know what do ou think about it, about the art, story, charactes.
I know the quality is not that great and everything is made by pencil... well to be honest I think is relly bad hahaha... Because I don't have a computer and the one I use is not mine I can't use any program to make them look better, but I will redo every page in the future, anyway apart of that what do you think?
http://tapastic.com/episode/61901
http://tapastic.com/episode/89669
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