It's Elena today for @EmmaItoh
I honestly think you do a fine job of depicting her as her intended age, especially given stylistic considerations, but I totally understand concerns that drawing to age is difficult. I have far fewer occasions to draw women in my work, and perhaps least of all ones as young as Elena! But it was a good challenge that I enjoyed. I hope I did an okay job.
I also managed to make myself jealous of her shirt. I want that shirt! XD