@nelmathyria I'm actually already subscribed to your comic, but I had not reached your latest work. What originally drew me to your work was the way you structured your comics in the first chapter. I thought it was a unique way of creating a comic using cut outs, but I still thought your colored stuff and more traditional comic structure is still quite good.
I appreciate the characters with the exception of one, but I'll mention my problem with that a little later. I like how the characters seem to act much like their respected age, and the instructors being "somewhat" adults. I think your writing is quite clever and witty at times. Karen being my personal favorite mostly because I can believe a teenage girl having the kind of existential problems she has having an ability that can be viewed as more destructive than helping. Also I think Emily is also quite charming not only in design, but her ability as well. Never been a fan of 'psychic' but a fortune teller esque character brings plot developments that can be explored.
Now please don't be upset, and take it like a grain of salt... Have you ever seen the movie "Sky High?" I think you pull the young teens with super powers off a lot better than that movie did, and please don't take direct notes from it either. But I bring it up because when it comes to super power genre being completely original is really difficult. One of the first things I noticed when I read the second chapter was the fact that the main protagonist has the ability to vibrate so fast that he can physically appear invisible despite still being able to see his foot inprint in the grass I was surprised Karen didn't mention. As someone who is an avid super hero fan originality can be a real pain in the arse to pull off for an already established speedster ability. I think I would like to see you try and explore something unique to the protagonist, and believe me I can't think of anything that hasn't already happened (Flash kind of ruins everything for the whole speedster ability).
I hope I wasn't being rude, I still like your work and will still continue to read your work. Originally your layout style is what drew me to your comic, but the colors are bright and the characters for the most part are indeed very likable. I think as long as you can keep up the charm factor you might have a good enough comic that can outshine "Sky High," but as long as you avoid the overplayed cliques cliche I think your work will be fine (or do something with it that no one else has even tried with it).
So who wants to chew out my series JODDAS VAPD? It's about a group of college students living a moderately normal life.